Thursday, April 30, 2015

The Detectives of Iris Valley - Episode 4

Sorry this wasn't up on Wednesday. (I've been trying to post TDOIV on Wednesday.) Here it is!
Starring Samantha as Iris.
Starring Saige as Miss Grace Fleur (Pronounced 'flower'.) 
"Let's go look for the note," suggested Iris.
Miss Fleur and Iris looked for a long time. "Last spot!" declared Iris.
She looked her way and Miss Fleur looked the other. 
She gestured to her way. "Nothing this way! What about you Miss Fleur?"
"Miss Fleur?"
Miss Fleur was asleep.
Iris shook Miss Fleur. "Miss- Grace- Fleur. WAKE UP!!" Iris yelled.
Miss Fleur jumped up and knocked Iris over.
"What? Did you find the note?" Miss Fleur asked.
"No, I didn't," replied Iris.
Iris leaned up against a tree. She was discouraged.
"We will never find it. I'm going have to tell the mayor," stated Miss Fleur.
Iris turned to stare at Miss Fleur, "No! Don't do that!" she pleaded.
(She really does looked scared. I don't know how it got like that.)
"Please?"
"Why not?" asked Miss Fleur 
"Because I need time." said Iris.
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Where did the note go? And why does Iris need time?
~Saige~


2 comments:

  1. I really like this series :) you do an amazing job of creating mystery and suspense.

    - Ellie

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    1. Thank you! I'm glad you like the series! I am having fun with making it!
      ~Saige~

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